Is my narrative clear? How could it be improved?
My narrative is pretty clear as it is a storyboard of what i do in the morning so all the drawings have been made by either memory or images i have taken in my location. i could improve in my images by showing a better connection between the images and by having a more successful storyboard for animation.
What do i need to refine? How could i do this?
I need to define the relation of one image to another, in other words how one frame leads to another and i also need to refine my drawing by using less lines and by making it look less rough. I can improve on it by drawing story boards of my mundane activities (like i have) or by sing my imagination to come up with a step by step process.
How can I develop this idea for my Location project outcome?
I can develop this idea by creating story boards of my everyday activities, or everyday activities of people around me in my location and y including ideas, images and texts that are being used in my locations and even conversations.
How could I shoot this idea? What do I need to do next?
I could shoot this idea either by recreating the instances and recording it on camera by using the people in my location as the characters or I could create a stop motion animation, which in my perspective is a look alike and inaccurate representation of my location along with made up animated characters.
